by Fsams Oct 16, 2012
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Wouldn't I wish I was your own |
by Autuumnbree
I would like to say first that this is a very beautiful poem. I really like the flow here and the word choice is fantastic, it's true a friend can take on so many roles like a mother, doctor, counselor, and etc. |
by L
This piece has left me wondering if you are talking to the bird ( it's the first time I see this term nightingale) |
by Amreen
Truly heart touching... I just love the rhyming which adds so much of an ease to read and this piece has so much of love and dedication shown... |
by Formidable Muse
The flow in this is so beautiful. I love how deep it feels, like the state you were in while writing it must have been lovely. Nicely written. 5/5 from me |