Loves haiku

by Ole Carsten   Oct 16, 2012


Feelings is our glue
love is immanent in us
taking love higher

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Now feelings is our glue
    love is immanent in us
    taking love higher

    Now (1) Feelings (2) is (1) Our (1) Glue (1) =6

    -- It might work better to say

    Feelings are our glue
    love is immanent in us
    taking love higher

  • 12 years ago

    by Edward Oropeza

    Hmn, nice piece...but maybe try to consider this word as two syllable > fee-ling...and consider haiku is 5-7-5...good job

    • 12 years ago

      by Ole Carsten

      Hi thanks for you kind comments, according to wordcounter, it should be 5-7-5, but maybe it counts wrongly, sorry if that is the case

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