The bird has no home other than those eyes.
wanting to fly but the only place where the bird can land are those precious eyes.

I got a bit confuse with the bird.. rather with this sentence

My dream, yesterday I'd a big
bird visiting me on a twig..

if you are going to be the bird how can you visit you on the twig.. that question went throw my mind when I read it.

Other than that sentences, I think everything else is good, I didn't count the syllables but I'm guessing you checked them with the site so they should be okay.
5/5