A free soul

by Wafaa   Oct 16, 2012


Written to Ben -naughtymouse for a club challenge by MapleTree

In the sanctity of your poems,
words have a certain aura
that lightens up their poise.

Sheer hope,
held
in the crystals of your soul,
has its aroma
when you walk among people,
it lifts up their spirits
brightens their days.

I may not know you in person,
But I know enough to make me smile
From the fact that you love a good
chocolate fudge brownie
To the fact that your Adidas
is your favorite item of clothing
Some beautiful things to know..

You are a fighter, I can tell
by the strength I see
Not with the eyes,
But with the heart,
melting,
after each stanza you create.

In between Chinese walls,
your imagination grows bigger.
In that simple life,
In the beauty of nature,
In the culture of peace,
lies a free spirit.
The best of its kind.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Write Sonia.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    That's... beautiful.
    I like your style in here so much!

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Well doen for taking part in this challenge and for winning with this poem.

    You really put a lot of effort into this and really captured his personality and character. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Amazing amazing amazing... I have no words to describe your piece... This is so heart touching, soft and beautiful...
    I am in <3 with this :)
    You write awesome:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    A lovely poem for Ben, congrats on your win.