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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Hmm.. there is always room for fun...there are activities that doesn't require too much activity and yet they are fun... I might have misunderstood the poem but I think its about a grandpa who doesn't have the strength to play with his granddaughter.

    I found this poem different. I loved the way you said that love branches with no reason, it's just given. The love is felt but towards the end seems like the fun ended. But I think the love is still there.