Way to go with the description! a lot of visuals i really enjoyed this. great work!

Edward, I just want to tell you that your vocabulary is such a breath of fresh air!

I get so tired of reading the same metaphors, and the over-used adjectives.

The imagery in this piece was great-

"her face tattered with grudge, her hands a spear of acolytes"

"she summons her silhouette and seer,
reflecting in me the damage of my soul,"

"but in the middle
of Insolence, lies a thousand gargoyles, basilisk
skeleton marauder, hangman soul and headless knights"

Just a few of the things that stood out to me.

Well done!

This was a really good piece i like your word choice ,
I agree with cara your vocabulary bought somthing new and fresh.

Well done on the challenge