Feedback please.

"wrip" should be "rip" sweetie "a" should be "as" in the wave part of the poem and the thing is sweetie i was born a little devil lol no joke i remember my dad would say that i was a hard kid to raise with all the trouble i was in when i was a kid i changed now i manage my own club and the people in it but it's all good and i love the message i truly do sweetie my favorite part in this poem would have to be
"But we were all once angels
We were born with such a privelage at birth
You weren't born the Devils son
Believe me. . .
And to the devils son
There will never be a first"
5/5

Lady Ashes

*rip it out

*rip it out