by Maple Tree Oct 17, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
You are that of a fine wine, |
by Darren
My first thoughts with this is it is very tight. The stanzas and lines within are short and concise. I love the descriptive suggestions in this. 'luxurious masculinity' is awesome. |
by Meme
Seduction art, lol and still so elegant and feminine just like you are. Loved the word choice in this piece, and the flow it had. It was an easy read and very much enjoyable. |
This is just breathtaking. You just nail it with all themes. You always excel at capturing the crux of any feeling you want to convey. Very vivid, i love the imagery it induced. So romantic and captivating. You engage the reader like a glue. |