Seduced

by Maple Tree   Oct 17, 2012


You are that of a fine wine,
our sensual tryst goes past
the depths of my quivering soul,
devour me gently upon your lap
of luxurious masculinity.

I desire the comfort of
strength that lures my
passion, beyond the realm
of titillating fantasies,
my lover.

We shall discover the true
meaning of euphoric travels,
as my finger traces the curves
of your sweet lips, tasting
every inch of your whispers.

*Written for PnQ Vamp Contest*

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    My first thoughts with this is it is very tight. The stanzas and lines within are short and concise. I love the descriptive suggestions in this. 'luxurious masculinity' is awesome.
    Sounds like a rare quality. I also love the imagery of 'titillating fantasies' I am sure this was chosen purely because of its suggestiveness.
    I can almost imagine someone whispering this as it has so much emotion in it.
    The pace is as it should be, slow and meaningful. Very sensual and a great tone.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Seduction art, lol and still so elegant and feminine just like you are. Loved the word choice in this piece, and the flow it had. It was an easy read and very much enjoyable.

    Awesome ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is just breathtaking. You just nail it with all themes. You always excel at capturing the crux of any feeling you want to convey. Very vivid, i love the imagery it induced. So romantic and captivating. You engage the reader like a glue.

    You described the feeling of love in here so exquisitely. I love the feelings it creates in me. So serene and wonderful. Love is undoubtely the most exalted feeling ever possible. Makes you feel exotic and exudes a royal feeling when treated grandly. We should always cherish those moments we ever get to spend with our beloved ones. It may seem you might have all the time you need in the world. However, with every passing moment, you realise how much time isn't a friend to hold on to apart from memories you've created from spending time inlove.

    Lovely execution. So soothing and gets one in the mood for some love, :-) . I love this and i love you sis Andrea. Ciao! :-) ..