Oh My God, Meme.. that is perfection :)
I feel like singing itttttt x wish I had votes left.

This is a good piece, I just feel like the first stanza needs some editing to make it better. Though, I find it hard to add suggestion :-s and I think the editing part might be tough too but here is the part that i think needs some, "they always fail when put next to you" and that's because The flow don't sound like the rest of the piece. Other than that one, I thought there were many you's but I also thought that they were there to make an emphasis. So other than that I like this piece.

My favorite:

"You standardized my heart
to only beat for ones
like you, but there is none."

^^ This one I love. I like the thought. Your heart can only beat for this person and no one else because no one else is like him.

Wow Meme, this is very impressive. the form is very creative and I imagine quite hard to do.

the message of the poem is very sweet and adorable, how that one person captures your heart and you know there will never be another one like them.

Beautiful. x

Wow! What a beautiful poem... and I must say this is such an interesting form of poetry, I really enjoyed it and must say that the flow was so lovely, it wasn't even obvious it was a formed poetry.. nothing was forced!

The topic was simple, yet there was so much emotions and I could sense how important this man is and how no man could replace him.

Loved it! Great job :)

Meme,
I have never tried this type of form but you always manage to pull it off effortlessly, it flowed really well and nothing felt forced or out of place, the whole love thing was really mushy but I loved that and the emotions were really evident here.

Such beauty and love in the whole piece...
great write girl
x

This piece is heart-touching and so creative... Firstly, an excellent attempt for such a difficult pattern you used to paint your love and also a beautiful message shared. I like your pattern-poems as they show off your creativity and talent so well...Brilliant:)

And I still compare all
men to you; they always
fail when put next to you.
You standardized my heart
to only beat for ones
like you, but there is none.

^^

The way you started this poem shows that you are still having the same notion about the guy you love when it comes to love and that it is difficult for you to place any guy with him to match your feelings for you....
The standardized part is awesome!!

I nurtured your love
in me for years. It
grew as we grew, but
no one saw how I
loved you in silence.

^^
Truly, When we love someone secretly, our affection grows with every meet and sometimes they fail to see it in us and also we express our affection for them in their absence because we are shy to say them that we love them.

My tears broke the
disguise I wore
the day I knew
you cant be mine.

^^
But when reality hurts, our veil of sadness gets off and we can't always hide our grief that our love can't be ours...Sad:((

No need to
look any
further now,

there's no
one like

You!

^^
But still, your heart concludes with this, that when you still have someone to relate to, or love, that person is the immediate answer...

Beautiful display of emotions...
Great job:)

This is not an easy format of poetry to creatively write in, but you managed to write it beautifully. It sounded natural instead of sounding forced. good job!

"And I still compare all men to you; they always fail when put next to you."
That's my favorite part explains exactlyy the way I feel, its crzyyyy!!
Goodd poemm! Lovee itt! Could read it over and over again and neverr get sick of it. Great jobb :)

- Mirandaaa

I loved this 5/5. Easily relateable