Loved the flow of this piece. I do wish however it was split into stanzas as I feel it would bring more depth and emotion to the poem. But overall, well written.

- Joe

I, too, think it would benefit your poem if it was split into stanzas. Just my opinion, though.

I always like your life pieces, they always have such a great meaning behind them. Helping others become independent is what I get from this one... helping someone who is weak and make them strong enough to stand on their own too feet and learn to fly again.

Great piece.

We all need help from someone at some point in our lives that can helps grow up just as that little bird so that we can stand on our own then fly into the world.

This was well written, I love your piece because they are short and they get straight into the point.