Comments : One of these days

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    And you are also a talented and creative writer!!

    What a precious and fun piece this is!

    Love it!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Cute write. Made me smile. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Made me smile because I just love Coffee!!!
    Tea is good but Coffee just has it all...
    Damn, I'm thirsty now :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This so cute and funny in a way. An adorable write. Coffee is just the peak to having a moment of a strong refreshing spirit. The smell is so strong and makes one intoxicated in a beautiful way. The aroma of coffee is just enriching to the senses. Even a taste of its brew to the mind, is enough to fill one up. Its always good to relax with a mug of coffee, infused with its cream. Taste royal and the strength it exudes is just wonderful. Tea is great but coffee is just off the hook. I enjoyed reading this, short, concise and fun. Welldone! :)..

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Tsskk tsskk tsskk...just read this...how cute. This made me want to hold my pinky finger up an hold a coffee cup and say "fancy a spot of tea miss?" Lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This was an adorable piece, the metaphor of tea and coffee was creative, and I just love it!
    It's got a simplistic flare to it, but as I read it over and over again, the message took me deeper, way deeper.. I could feel almost like the author was expressing a sense of loneliness and it gave me a feeling of sarcastic tones.

    The tea cup is looking out at a sea of coffee cups and letting them know that maybe in time they might see the beauty of "tea".. the beauty within is what I'm feeling here...

    This poem actually made me want to drink of cup of tea.. ha ha. On a more serious note it has an inspirational message in my opinion and the beauty of the author's heart and soul can be felt throughout this poem. Awesome!!