The vision of death, is most definitely unforgettable, well done. I enjoyed the subtle rhymes.

I only have a suggestion though-

"The moon lit bright, with the clouds flourescent glow"
^^
I think you should shorten this line a tad, to improve the flow a bit. Something like " The moon lit bright with clouds eerie glow..etc.
Also I think you meant "fluorescent".

Other than that I quite enjoyed the piece.

Amazing!!!!!!!!