That feeling of never being good enough, or even just as good, I can say I know it all to well. I don't know why people have to constantly compare this person to that person. If we're taught to follow our own path, and be who we are...what does it matter someone else does?
Aside from that, I loved the title, it was quite unique. Your metaphors are also one of a kind. A sad but beautifully written piece of poetry :)

Love this one and very cleverly done too. It is good to see a title that makes you think you will read a certain form of poetry and then are surprised to find something totally different and unique. Nice work x