Beautiful poem,

I loved the part where you wrote:

"Sharply, I awake to an empty bed.
It is so cold without you. I turn over,
grab your memories and pull them near."

It's like the memories are a blanket and you use them to keep yourself warm when you are cold. Sad and touching 5/5

mandy :)

Awwww this poem is sooo beautiful i just love it it says of the heartbreak and the dreams that you just want to hold dear to your heart! that pain is what i wanted on my own poem and you know i needed a little more pain but this poem is so beautiful with the imagery and the emotions sweetie this is a good poem that i want to read this poem to my daughter one day when she marries lol! :)5/5

Beautifully written I love this heart touching piece. I just feel a need to say you're a good writer and this poem makes me think of my friend just the thought of him gives me chills. Another great write...

Keep writing...

Very noble, very touching, very dark. im starting to notice an insidiously delicious pattern with how you write. you mightve earned a place on my favorite poets list. this poem was good, like your others. an enjoyable read that was over almost too quickly. keep writing.

A Lovely Write!!!

"Remember the first time I fell for you?

I haven't gotten up since.

Three years of memories and

you still send a rush over me."
good beginning...through this very line(s) I can relate myself to *Some1* ...
Well written!
5/5