by Courageous Dreamer Oct 21, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Your fingertips travel from rib cage |
by Treehugger
This is a beautiful poem. Love is a splendid thing that can't be matched. Though many things might try and stop you. Time makes love strong and everyone becomes closer than ever. 5/5 |
by AngelDust
I have never read your work, either that or I don't remember reading it before so I thought it was about time I did. I'm happy I read this. It's like a breath or fresh air. It is beautiful. You worded this lovely and gave it a warm feel. 5/5 :-) |
by Jad
Jacey, it's been awhile since I have been able to read your work and this piece was really amazing. The emotions you pour into this piece are very powerful and the imagery is really great. I love the the way your wrote this poem as I found it to be a great work of art as the poem paints art all of its own. I am happy to know that you are finally with someone who loves and cares about you. You deserve the best and nothing less!! |
by Decayed
To be honest with you, both stanzas are beautiful, yet I found the 1st one to be so artistic, so original.................... no words to express, really... |