Comments : Lady of the Night

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    You did an AWESOME job with this piece, I love the addition of a Haiku:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love your nature poems darl! Because they are beautiful and unique...and I think nature is a really great thing, it heals the soul and can really make everything feel beautiful.

    This piece was just gorgeous and so well written, but as always I knew it would be.
    Lovely
    x

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    I find it uncanny how I can KNOW that you are writing about creatures and comforts of nature, but your metaphors take me somewhere else completely.

    I love your writing, and this piece is no different.

    "Protection is desired
    in the still of night,
    for restless invaders
    flock like demons,
    waiting to invade
    a tree which stands
    alone."

    I understand this is about the widow spider but I can relate to this stanza so well. =/

    Beautiful, Andrea!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Thank you Flower, Tara and Cara :-)

    Actually Cara, I am talking about a spider, but also I incorporate deeper messages within my nature pieces as well.. so Your interpretation and feelings are also similar to mine... thank you :-)