Comments : No excuse

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    This piece is a bit confusing...

    but I thought you meant that someone cheated on someone and there is no excuse for that.

    The reason why I find it confusing is because you use moon and I think some part of it you are referring the moon as her.. But you are also using the she.. So I don't know if you are referring to the moon or to she.

    • 12 years ago

      by Khalid M Darwish

      No Luce. She considers her beloved man as her moon. Just re-read the piece.
      She still loves him while he's keeping forgetting her.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Great one... I loved the metaphor here...
    Beautiful as always:)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Yeah, I have to learn to disconnect from Spanish. The moon is classified as a she so that always get me confuse when I read poems that classified it a he.

    Did you use a form poetry?

  • 12 years ago

    by cmfd

    Good poem keep up the work