This was awesome really deep and creative you can feel the emotions leap off the page

I have dreams as thick as steel and trust built on glass...

I loved this shows your dreams can never be broken but , you may take a while to trust and still be weary

Great poem :)

I really liked this one because it is exactly how I feel most of the time. When you have been through some of the things we have and have been given bad experiences which should have been good, it leaves you mistrusting anything good at all.

The way you have worded it here is very powerful and shows that you are a loving person but have your own insecurities about being loved back too. And so all you ask is that they treat you right and show you love and you will do the same back which is harder for us than it is for them.

My fave line is :

So, hurt me if you have to-

I won't feel a thing.

- I adore this because this is my defence I put up all the time, I disconnect myself from love and recieving it and being close to others to protect myself from being hurt again. So I won't ever feel that pain again, but learn to maybe feel the love.

Loved this one <3