Awwww sweetie this poem is very beautiful everyone has that problem at times.... still beautiful...5/5

Lady Ashes

This is beautiful, I love it

I seriously love the end Nikki... "I hope you drown in it"... a really in-your-face statement which goes through a lot of people's minds... deep, emotional, love it..

The ending summed it up. Loved the powerful and angry tone of it. Keep it up!

Very nice. The last line was powerful and hard. But it also shows that there is anger under all the pain, and shows that you will hear sooner than later. 5/5