Great poem I like the flow of this piece and find it to be inspirational. I think that the opening and ending is what makes it inspiring. Great poem.

This poem really touched home!

This poem really touched home!

I absolutely LOVED this poem. It is so real! The feelings you relate are so human and so easy to relate to that it almost becomes hard to read. I had to stop at some points and take a breather because I know exactly what you mean.

"Watching myself standing alone in the distance,
Screaming as they walk by but no one is listening."

These 2 lines, for example, really hit home with me. All I can say is life! Hasn't everyone felt like this at some point? Alone, misunderstood. You do a brilliant job of making your reader grasp what you are trying to say. These 2 lines were my favorite.

I also have to commend your rhyming, it makes the poem flow extremely well. It's not always easy to rhyme feelings but you did an exceptional job and the reader leaves understanding your story.

Thanks for sharing and please keep writing.

10/5 from me!

Good usage of wording, love your style and the meaning that lies behind in your writing. The only thing I would suggest is perhaps breaking this up into stanzas. Other than that, good work.