Comments : Tightrope

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, ok. So that was powerful. You must have been inside that very dark cloud when you came up with this, the imagery here of the tightrope is very creative to compare this with life. I actually picked up a few emotions here, loneliness and hopelessness and just pure isolation. Like there is nothing you can do but just carry on, every day the same, no matter how hard it is there is just no other option right now but to go forward.

    Hugs you, and keep writing.