Baby R! this is amaazzinnngggggggg...

Where do I start? I feel you so kindly break down other peoples poems that this deserves breaking down, but I'm just not sure if I can, seriously. This is incredible.

I feel like this is something I'd write when i was younger, I use to do stuff like this, make lists in my poetry. This is basically a list of what not to do in a dark forest, each stanza given a reason to not move. Loved that. Flashbacks to my old poetry I swear.

I absolutely LOVED your last stanza, again reminds me of myself, which makes me love this lmao....there was kind of sarcasm, and negativity in this. I can hear myself saying something like this.."ya know what just dont breathe, die, because this forest is gonna eat you. nom nom" haha Im jk, but seriously that sarcasm and the advice to just give up at the end just changes this whole tone of the poem in an instant and I love love love it! :)

This is simply amazing... I love the way you kept the reader engaged till the end and the conclusion just made this amazing.... Spectacular piece... :)