I've wrote stuff like this a time or two in my life and I hate that feeling.....wondering what he sees in another girl that you don't have, when really the one asking the questions has more than the one that's wanted...

Yuck. This poem brings back memories, but Imust say I do love this. Loved the ending question!

Wonderful piece... I like the title as it matches with the content...:)

Are you aware ( or maybe it is just me ) that the shape of this poem looks like an injection?

The message of the poem is good, I was trying to think of a title because it needs one. I am sturggling too. I am thinking along the lines of judgement or impressions, because it seems to be he see's what is first impressions and prefers them to what he finds out is underneath, if that makes sense?

Anyway, well done and keep them coming.