Creepy creepy, but I love it. Ever since you've challenge me to write a dark poem I've kind of liked them....but anyways. Loved the use of joining "your world" and then stating 6 feet under. Creative.

If you don't get wrapped up in the creepiness of this, you'll detect a sad reality which I did. An ending of something. A person. A relationship.

Loved this

I could visualize a dark story behind this poem. It has strong, deep and intense visuals which just made me like this piece...
Awesome...!!!:)

I could see the images so clearly , it had a dark tone all the way , just made me wanna keep reading good job

Uggh, what a poem! this piece was like a dark haunting film, those ones you want to hide behind a cushion but still feel really intrigued. The dark aspect behind this was evident but I could really see the sadness behind the story, the emotion itself was beautifully incorporated and touched me deeply.

You always manage to pull at me and make me feel everything ten times more than anyone else ever does, amazing.

xx

You do have a way with the dark poems. This was so good, it flowed really well and fast and yet it was still very eerie feeling. I agree with Chels that I picked up something it represented, like you were in a dark zone and needed to outlet this emotion and thought you had so this is what came out.

Hugs x