I love this piece, it has that sort of flow to it that makes the reader get lost, and the story as well, it was really interesting to read.
The image of two lovers and a broken relationship, time being stolen with another and you looking on as he acts as if you never were.

Brilliant babes
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I love this read; it's simply beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. We sometimes miss the most obvious signs that we are losing someone or no longer what they need and desire. Excellent write.

I don't have much to comment as this is straightforward but the sentiment is felt, it really feels when one reads it. Sometimes, we are strangers in people's hearts but there are times when real strangers feel in our heart that aren't strangers even thought we don't know them. My point, if we are strangers to the heart of someone that we shouldn't be strangers, then it was not meant. One day, there will come that stranger to your heart and his, that will feel like you and him have known for always. You'll see.

Wow! I love it!! I'm always amazed by your poetry... because I really connect with your poems, and what you convey.. and I love your style of writing. I felt this poem from start to end, and I could imagine the emotions you painted here... it's such a difficult thing to feel... to love someone and dream of a future with them, but then it doesn't work out and you're left with all these feelings... (Okay I'm rambling lol) But that's what I understood from the poem.

I really enjoyed it! :)