Cotton Escape

Finally she has another nature peice. It is so nice to see them after the darker or deeper poems because it takes you to a different place of tranquility and peace and I would hope that this, for a moment, was how you felt when writing this in the zone.

Beautiful words Maple.

Beautiful just beautiful

This is beautiful Andrea, I felt that it is really calming to the soul, I got lost in it and felt peaceful for just a few minutes, it made me slip into a totally sane world and it was a total joy to read...
really beautiful, as always
xxxx

She is the breeze of a tropical
midnight, drenched in rain drops,
drowning from yesterdays
sunset, eyes become fixed
on highs and lows
of a horizon's melody.

You know what...I was thinking..this is me..totally me when I read this stanza!

Lights of a thousand
wishes, engulf her
spirited cotton
shadow, becoming
one with the sky,
hearing white
sounds of doves flying....

^^^

and then this...My name means light but I just could not connect with the cotton and the doves on a personal level so yeah..guess it wasn't about me after all haha!!! Still...I enjoyed...lovely work Andrea!