Comments : Cotton Escape

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    She is the breeze of a tropical
    midnight, drenched in rain drops,
    drowning from yesterdays
    sunset, eyes become fixed
    on highs and lows
    of a horizon's melody.

    You know what...I was thinking..this is me..totally me when I read this stanza!

    Lights of a thousand
    wishes, engulf her
    spirited cotton
    shadow, becoming
    one with the sky,
    hearing white
    sounds of doves flying....

    ^^^

    and then this...My name means light but I just could not connect with the cotton and the doves on a personal level so yeah..guess it wasn't about me after all haha!!! Still...I enjoyed...lovely work Andrea!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is beautiful Andrea, I felt that it is really calming to the soul, I got lost in it and felt peaceful for just a few minutes, it made me slip into a totally sane world and it was a total joy to read...
    really beautiful, as always
    xxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Beautiful just beautiful

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Finally she has another nature peice. It is so nice to see them after the darker or deeper poems because it takes you to a different place of tranquility and peace and I would hope that this, for a moment, was how you felt when writing this in the zone.

    Beautiful words Maple.