Comments : Restart

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awwww sweetie this poem is like ripping my heart in two this was how i was when i first got my heart ripped apart

    Lady Ashes

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    There are promises broken
    this is really disappointment for everyone

    My heart was unprepared
    i really like this line because how can we prepare for the unexpected sadness

    Then where do I begin to restart
    I think the end of this line need a question mark
    Then where do I begin to restart?
    I don't know it's right or not?

    Overall in this poem i truly related with some lines
    nice written 5/5