I like the rhyming here... And you always have a story to share through your poems. I like your narrating style:)
Great piece:)

"A powerful act with an amazing disguise
Causes deceit in a blink of an eye
Love is the word that follows these rules
At times so beautiful and at times so cruel"

favorite part of the poem. very powerful, very vivid, and profoundly relatable. the whole poem read to me as if it were almost meant to be a song. definitely a good right. its a shame there isn't a title but it is the authors choice to not have one.

Amazing!! What lured me to it was the title!! I can relate to it all except for the last paragraph!!
But it felt good to read in the moment that I'm in!!