Comments : Pivotal Point

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A very intriguing piece. Although the theme is common, the author mentioning himself/herself as unstable and moody, perhaps a walking, ticking time bomb.

    I love how Uranium 235 has been mentioned. An isotope of Uranium, capable of sustaining fission chain reaction. Describes the capability of the author to go beyond regular channels of limitations in terms of losing control on himself/herself. Thus, being precautious is recommended.

    And those who have witnessed such an...explosion in the past would prefer to maintain a safe distance, from the author? ..I am not sure whether the poem is written from the perspective of the author going through the notion of self-resentment, or perhaps displaying the power to drive away hordes of wrong people that he/she may encounter against his/her will.

    Very well written.