Tree of Life

by Maple Tree   Oct 27, 2012


Frayed endings,
mark a time
in life, when
dew drops
ache
to fall,
.
.
.
Teasing
Rain
Engulfs
Endlessly,
.
.
One
Fearless
.
.
Lullaby
Ignites
Frozen
Eyes
.
.
.
.

I'm finally laid to rest,
"Mother Nature",
I'm home.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Beautiful words Maple, I adore these layouts of yours, it just adds a little spark into the poem. I like the acrostic in the middle of the opening and beginning. It represented to me we have the opening in life ( really big fuss of being born ) Then the middle of the poem is how we just get on with what we have to deal with and keep going taking life for granteed many times, then we have the big ending which again is made a big fuss of but we seem to forget to make a big fuss of actually living our life.

    This is actually quite inspiring to make the most of life and what we have while we have it.

  • 12 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    You know I've I got one Big smile on my face! :D

    No where near the confidence yet to do what you guys do to a poem.. But when I do... I'll be back to give it, its proper justice!!

    BEAUTIFUL :D

    Big,big hug missy :)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I really want to comment on this...I do and I will but not just now...and I feel really bad about not giving this the comment it deserves...I really do.
    You know what your poetry does to me and I can't explain right now...but you know.
    I love you...x Hugs