Comments : Semblance

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great metaphor of the tissue in this one, " the tissues of my life " this was very clever. I like how you used it dry and wet also to express what your thoughts were.

    I like the last few lines being seperated, it shows the meaning of the poem, in that you can fel the love but yet it doesn't feel like it is right here yet, There is something still seperating you from it? Or maybe it is just that you are holding back from receiving it.

    Keep the love poems coming.