God Of Rain

by frozen rose   Oct 29, 2012


The God Of Rain watches from a cloud
Hearing children's laughter from the crowd
Growing louder as he becomes furious
Dark clouds formed and kids grew curious
Lightning flashes and is accompanied by thunder
Again, the people began to wonder
Then, icy crystals fall from the sky
He laughs as he hears the children cry
Blood mixes in with the pouring rain
Bodies shiver on the wet ground in pain
He savors the screams with a smile on his face
Putting the children in their lowly place
Skin begins to disinigrate and melt
Pure agony and torture is what they felt
The God Of Rain collects the childrens hearts
And assembles their broken body parts
To use as rain for the next deadly storm
While he watches the crying families torn

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    A very dark and well written poem. Interesting story and the rhymings are awesome. All in all a great poem from you, again.

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I love how this rhymes. I love how this is so dark. everything about it is very perfect

  • 11 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Breath taking! Amazing piece

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Powerful piece.