Comments : The Sandy Hurricane (Chained Haikus)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful and touching formed piece sweet Khalid... this is heartfelt and the message is a powerful one and I thank you for sharing it... on a technical note: Mercy you are talented with formed poetry... really enjoy!! hugs you!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    High waves reached the darkened clouds
    i like this line,
    since none can stop God's commands
    and i agree with this line because natural disaster is may be a god's command..

    good written once again