Can't believe nobody has left a comment...

I have always toyed with the idea of posting a 'roses are red...' poem.

You can manipulate them and say so much.

You have taken a very romantic poem and turned it around to something very sad.
It is a reminder that not everybody lives a fairytail romance, it is also a message to the person that has hurt you this bad.

great piece.

I think people forget that Before Disney fairytales were not the blissful happily everafter people imagine. I like you're twist here.

I love the spin on the roses are red qoute. This is so sad though. Who ever you wrote this for must be very special in your life. And my take on it is this person doesnt know how much they hurt you at all. You say all of your problems which could mean so many things. I like the vague mystsry of this. It leaves the readers guessing on who hurt you and why they did. I hope you can forgive this person though because anger is never good to hang onto. I know suicide is never the answer but the second stanza I like as well. You twisted the ending around and made the readers heart wrench. Words are very hurtful and can be taken to heart indeed. You can't let people get you down. You seem so strong hun. Please forgive!! Hugs. 5/5