Wow this is great babe

I like it. It gave me chills...good chills lol. 5/5 from me Ash. :)

Dias de Muertos... This isa beautiful poem and it really captures the essence of the holiday. We just covered this in Spanish class... love it.

This is a sadly beautifully written funeral piece. Its a sad scenario to gather at a burial for the final goodbye to a loved one. They may be gone in life and body but in spirits they leave with us. We can speak to them and they listen to us. We can ask them for a favour and they'll surely acknowledge us. We just need keep a relentless faith and pray for the repose of their soul. That will assure them we've accepted our fate and are glad they're in a better and a divine shade of The Almighty.

Its never easy to say goodbye and move on with only memories of our dead ones. However, those memories will stay with us forever. It'll be a pacifier to us. We should always keep moments shared with our deceased ones, close to our hearts. With perseverance and a strong will. Life goes on for good and everything will be worthwhile. Death is a life circle that can't be avoided. Its among one of 'The purpose of life'.

A lovely piece, gloomy but exquisitely conveyed. Keep writing.. . Welldone!

You wrote differnet, lol. i was all locked in the mood and i read the word aloud and laughed. damn!

:)

Great read, loved it <3