Bittersweet Summer

by Edgar Jones   Oct 31, 2012


The summer, the follies, the turns
Your words, your feelings, your burns
The exuberance from this brief start
Splintered a crevice deep in my heart
Chance took me by a quick surprise
Whispered into my ear soothing lies
Opened my eyes to an empty room
Holding my chest to heal this wound

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Chance took me by quick surprise

    ^I think this line needs an "a" right after "by"

    Chance took me by a quick surprise.

    Nicely done, love hurts, it seems. Rather deception? This piece had a good flow so I thought that it might had a syllable count. however, it is free style so it took me by surprised.

    Well done.

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