Breathing and Breathless

by Yakori bint Muhammed   Nov 1, 2012


16th October, 2012.

Ever thought why we clad with a
draft of bouquets,
guarding our crux to its
ambivalent string.
Emotions are cringing to the
sunny weather
that further questions a
mantle of subtlety.

Beings are invariably swimming in a
stream of uncertainty,
to gather answers that clouds
foaming resilience.
How long can one persevere to
muddling miseries,
cascading down complexities
of life?

Our persona is bewitched to the
insanity of fates decorum
that vows to instill a
basket of virtue.
So many gems are used to adorn the
central grandeur
of humanity swishing escapades
in nature.

Is contentment a pillar to support
a flowery characters tidal gesture
in a vast seasonal storm?
No amount of caprice can be draped
on the shoulder of a quirky
ethical fountain.

When moral integration can only
assure a cruise
with patience and tolerance roots
seeded in earth quaintly.
Then we can ponder in a
labyrinth of vagueness
or accept the imperative rudiments
of life's colours.

Choices and actions lying on a platter
of the skies warmth
can surely be a worthwhile muse.
Live to be exalted like the waterfall flowing
in affluence of its moments tranquility.

As we're indebted to exalt to our purpose
on the sands of our life and its purpose
to accomplish a terrain among jewels of existence.

(c) Y-MAG

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  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Thoughtful and beautiful piece. Really magical, I enjoyed it from start to finish and the picture that was painted in my head while reading it came so smooth and easily by the words which you used. Captured me from the first santza to the last in a mesmerizing and epic poem with so much force and focus on emotional expression. Great job! Loved it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    The maturity in your writing is beyond astonishing! You write with a great deal of elegance and and smartness.

    You captured the true essence of what a life poem should be like. The language, the ease of words, the meanings be hinged them was all so perfect.

    Keep it up dear :)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    What a lovely poem... I really enjoyed reading it... it was like a breath of fresh air.

    I like how you wrote this poem.. it really captivated me as the reader. Your word choice was excellent, with a lot of great words chosen.

    I like how this poem is about life, and simplicity of it... you made me feel the questions that we sometimes about life, and how we search for contentment and enlightenment. I felt so balanced as I was reading this piece.

    "As we're indebted to exalt to our purpose
    on the sands of our life and its purpose
    to accomplish a terrain among jewels of existence. "

    ^^ the ending was flawless!! Love ittt!!

    Amazing poem!

    • 12 years ago

      by Yakori bint Muhammed

      Thanks loads for your thoughts, grateful am i and glad you felt balanced as you read. Gracias!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is a very thought after piece... Chelsey is right about reading this again as it holds deep meaning in its words... You speak so open about life and picture out reality... I always love your writes for its maturity and the intense emotions it carry...
    Excellent piece:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Is contentment a pillar to support
    a flowery characters tidal gesture
    in a vast seasonal storm?
    No amount of caprice can be draped
    on the shoulder of a quirky
    ethical fountain.

    ^ Oh mer gawd!! I loveddd this stanza so much!!

    I loved this whole poem..What an intriguing piece really to speak of life, society, humans and our way of thinking, and decorating it in metaphors to get us thinking...that is creatively brilliant to be honest. I read this three times, because once is not enough to grasp what you are trying to say...This is the type of poetry I love reading from you...it intrigues me, it gets my brain cells moving hehe!

    Amazing job!

    • 12 years ago

      by Yakori bint Muhammed

      I appreciate your comments really, thanks dear. Good you exercising your brain cells ;-) ..

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