Is contentment a pillar to support
a flowery characters tidal gesture
in a vast seasonal storm?
No amount of caprice can be draped
on the shoulder of a quirky
ethical fountain.

^ Oh mer gawd!! I loveddd this stanza so much!!

I loved this whole poem..What an intriguing piece really to speak of life, society, humans and our way of thinking, and decorating it in metaphors to get us thinking...that is creatively brilliant to be honest. I read this three times, because once is not enough to grasp what you are trying to say...This is the type of poetry I love reading from you...it intrigues me, it gets my brain cells moving hehe!

Amazing job!

This is a very thought after piece... Chelsey is right about reading this again as it holds deep meaning in its words... You speak so open about life and picture out reality... I always love your writes for its maturity and the intense emotions it carry...
Excellent piece:)

What a lovely poem... I really enjoyed reading it... it was like a breath of fresh air.

I like how you wrote this poem.. it really captivated me as the reader. Your word choice was excellent, with a lot of great words chosen.

I like how this poem is about life, and simplicity of it... you made me feel the questions that we sometimes about life, and how we search for contentment and enlightenment. I felt so balanced as I was reading this piece.

"As we're indebted to exalt to our purpose
on the sands of our life and its purpose
to accomplish a terrain among jewels of existence. "

^^ the ending was flawless!! Love ittt!!

Amazing poem!

The maturity in your writing is beyond astonishing! You write with a great deal of elegance and and smartness.

You captured the true essence of what a life poem should be like. The language, the ease of words, the meanings be hinged them was all so perfect.

Keep it up dear :)

Thoughtful and beautiful piece. Really magical, I enjoyed it from start to finish and the picture that was painted in my head while reading it came so smooth and easily by the words which you used. Captured me from the first santza to the last in a mesmerizing and epic poem with so much force and focus on emotional expression. Great job! Loved it!