Brought tear to my eye :( really good keep writing 5/5

This is creative, I do love the story line.

Oh...so sad a poem...heart breaking...loaded with emotions...
"All that was lost to her;

Upon that bright night,

A dream came floating by,

Of her little daughter and the man that made her smile.

How they said they had missed her so,

That they were okay,

And that they were waiting till the day that she would eventually be with them once again;

Slowly the dream started to fade away,

And she prayed that they would stay with her for just one more second,

Leaving the haven of her dreams she wakes up with tears flowing down her cheeks,..."
The emotions are really well expressed...
Cutie, while reading this i sounded somewhat like this... Ah...ah...aaa...which means, there was a crack in my voice! Lol

Oh Sally! This poem was great and the imagery was like a song singing to me , like lyrics, great!

A powerful but sad piece, I know you wrote this over a month ago, but its eerie how I chose to read it today, on a day of such tragedy. Beautiful poem 5/5