Khalid I love this form, one I have never tried, I will do soon though...(probably in the next ten mins!!)

Okay, great attempt but in line 5, I don't think the word 'hearer' works.

That is my only niggle

I would change hearer for 'mirror'

then write as so;

Mirror
clearer
Dearer
Nearer
Whomever I mirror, clearer to
will remain the nearer, dearer You

just my suggestion it is your poem after all.