Comments : Rise
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12 years ago
This piece pulled feelings of irritation from me (up until the very end.)
Seriously, every few lines, I'm thinking "What a fookin douchebag", "a sshole", "pompous bastard"
I think you scribed the feelings of being taken advantage of, having the life sucked from you....very well
I like how after describing this familiar process...of loving too much, giving too much, being left with nothing after being everything to someone....you basically, wave your finger high when you reference
"But from ashes, a phoenix is reborn."
(My favorite symbol of true strength btw)
The last line, made me think..hell yes. Let the heartbreak roll right off your fkn back and rise above all this.
Powerful. Which, I love.
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12 years ago
by ah satan 666
Stupid grin is back....I love your reviews :D
It took me a while to sort my head and feelings out,...
One- so I could finish "alas...forever my love"
Two- get my feelings down on paper and out of my head for this shity ending.
Three- so I could move on! :)
I used ben as the enemy to be honest...(Sorry ben) There's a few of his poems that hit me hard, one especially but also gave me a release, as at the time I didn't want to deal with any of it! But he inspired me, "if he can do it, so shall I"... the guy is facking lethal with a pen... Utmost respect for him.
Anywho, there you have it and now I can let go! :D
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11 years ago
Powerful Imagery!
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11 years ago
Powerful Imagery!
