The last one (senryu)

WOW!! This Senryu is evidance enough to show the power of words. Just 17 sylales but they speak volumes!

You penned it perfectly.

xxx

I can't comment.... just gonna nominate it... its really good... ( and I don't care if people come around and say I gave a lame comment! You know me and you know how emotional I get with some writes... and you know how I roll sometimes ;p ) love this!

Great little senryu Chels Chels, I wonder why you put it in misc though since it screams out depression and suicide?

It is very powerful and I think the title empowers it even more because once you understand the poem then read the title again it is like saying this will be the final thing this person ever writes.

I love the way you used the pen like a knife, such a unique thing to see not just in a poem but to fit it into a senryu also.

Loved it <3

Wow! What a powerful senryu!!! It's deep and dark.... and I like that you chose to write about this subject in a senryu, because in such short words you portrayed the emotions and subject so well.

I like how you compared your pen to a knife - it was an interesting touch, and how you're writing suicidal notes, as if letting out your emotions and pain through poetry.

Love it!

Wooow short, but its really stronggg.
Great job Chels:)