Comments : If I Die Today

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is such a breath taking poem, i read it 3 times to absorb it all in. Very profound and meaningful. I love such sort of poems when it challenges one to interprete according to ones comprehension. I love the images it paints in my mind, vivid and exotic. Gets one thinking how it'll turn out in the next line perhaps stanza..

    Lifes' trials and uncertainties are confounded with questions. We go through miseries that keep pushing us further to the unknown, that'll paint a package of pangs of fate and tribulations. We live for a purpose and need to achieve that goal but with unforseen calamities that show up. We just can't assure a satisfactory ascend to our purpose of existence. Nothing good comes easy and to see your objective draining away, without an aim is most painful.

    Whatever our plight lets try to accomplish our goals, through an unrelenting faith, staunch determination and will to persevere in all that we're subjected to. The puzzle will fall into place and with a hopeful spirit all shall be fine.
    Good message and your poems makes one ponder which is great.
    Lovely write!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ridge

    Thank you. 'Preciate !