Impulse Murderer

by LostWords   Nov 4, 2012


Perhaps I was not created for this world?
My soul is jaded with ire.

The hunger came back into my brain.
It never really left.

How could I have known this is shark water,
while I hurled you overboard?

I have approached the root of insanity.
This sums up my cravings.

There is merely this.
Can my vehemence defeat yours?

Poem #5
*For the Raven's, "one a day" poetry challenge for the month of November.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Great Job!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Yes, very intense and powerful work here!
    Your words cut like a knife! Brilliant, I liked it!!!!

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you Amreen and Peter. Ha Peter you crack me up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Intense and powerful... Good attempt dear:)