Comments : My Better Half

  • 12 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    Ugh.

    I have such a hard time commenting on your poems.
    I feel like I don't ever have the words to do them justice.

    I think this poem is a wonderful affirmation of your love for your husband.

    My favorite stanza:

    "I write of past
    deception and dark
    days, but in the end
    when I snuggle under
    the covers of our
    happiness, it is you
    who has given me
    hope, comfort,
    and a peaceful
    place to rest
    my soul."

    As usual, I'm drawn to the piece I can relate to the most. I too, write a lot of dark pieces that are pulled from the past, but it really doesn't do justice to the people that have helped me bring me out of the dark since then.

    You're an amazing writer Andrea.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Ughhhhh! My heart! I am SPEECHLESS!!

    @_@

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Andrea what the......you're getting all my nominations this week omg.....a wee bit speechless here ...like no joke....what is this? Why isn't this framed next to your nightstand for him to read??...

    Perfection....nothing less.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Just copied it and placed it under his pillow ;p

    thank you Ladies... :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    OMG!!!

    Doesn't matter where I'm reading lately, everyone's been bitten by the love bug!

    It is truly an amazing feeling having your faith revived and soul reignited and finding that person to whom you can bare your soul :) .... I wish you both many,many more years of happiness for your future.

    This is truly outstanding Andrea,
    Bless you both :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Wafaa

    Omg this is breathtaking :')

    my fav stanza is:

    ' until the bronze
    of your eyes
    marked the eternal
    flame that burns each
    night before our slumber.'

    this really touched my heart and filled it with warmth.

    I love you andrea!! ughh best poetry ever!! *-*

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    So happy that you finally found that true love that everyone searches for... these words are truly touching and melts the heart...