Holy Grail

by MyHalozChokinMe   Nov 5, 2012


This cast iron will breaking under the
pressure of lesser Gods as the mood
falls once again, my bed of solace,
my throne of repent.

Returning to past fragments of
filtered memories, strong with
sultry scent, like a permeated
fog, full of loving faces fading in
and out, until dawn breeds a new
life, just as fragile as the last.

Triumphant beyond dreams,
I found my Holy Grail
upon the face of your
adoration, and my own
self worth, in the light
of love flickering in
your eyes upon mine-

Taking it as a sign to submit
all doubt to the wall of
infinity.

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  • 12 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    Well... we've got Ben giving reference to Sigmund Freud as an innuendo...

    And Cara displaying a silhouette of unconscious desire... Maybe?

    Well I guess your both on the same page... No pun intended :)

    LMFAO!!!!!!

    Ben, it was meant in the nicest possible way about your poetry... Whether it be good love/ bad love/ lost love etc...you rock it, in all areas!... I can't comment on you, as regards to your life.. because I don't have a clue? But your poetry I have the privilege of reading :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    "love guru" lmao heeeellllll noooo i just love a bit of romance is all lol...

    And yes a banana....probably something froydian going on there lol ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    So not fair!.... He busted my ass and beat me to it, bloody mouse! (Jokes) :)

    Anyhow... What I was gunna say to this was ... "You don't do love poems my ass"....

    This is amazing and everything else I was gunna say Ben has said... But he's the "love guru" for love poems so, I'll gracefully step down from my high but noble steed and bow down to thee.

    Your poem deserves its rightful review from the master :)

    Oh and the layout, spot on missy.... Ben your edited comment made me LMAO

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    @_@!

    Freakin awesome write!!

    Ok, so its no secret im a bit of a lurve poem fan....and this is going into the favs for sure, im sure i dont have to really going into the flow and word choice etc because as always it is epic.....however....when i think of the holy grail..i always think of it being linked to the gods, to the unattainable, to royalty ...to many things and you capture each of those elements within this relativly short (for you) but wonderful piece :-)))

    Also, i like the emotional flow of it.....from strong to weak to strong again with assurance....really this piece is written masterfully xx

    Edit:

    Btw....lol....i love the shape of this poem too...very creative...if i had done it it would have ended up looking like a banana lol just sayin

    • 12 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Really, you give me too much credit, but thank you.

      And really, a FOOKIN BANANA????

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