Title suggestion: Thirsty

MEME OMGGGGG!! What in the...this is so breathtaking, which is usually what love poems are to me, but this is a different type of breathtaking...I kept gasping the whole time I was reading and felt like I had no idea where your feelings would go with this...

That last stanza, I had to a giggle a bit because it reminded me of my writing and personality. I loved the "Dont tell me" part, yeah! Get in their face! Thats how I like it :)

Totally nominating this! Flawless!

I don't have a suggestion for the title just yet, I'll think about that one...um...the poem, uhh, what can I say? Totally awesome, amazing, astounding, breathtaking, captivating, delicate, yet strong and bold....

If I could comment on the poem properly, I would, I am just in shock, in awe and just unable to put it into words.

:O YEAH