by Chelsey Nov 5, 2012
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Your maple leaves shed like dry skin in the winter. |
by Maple Tree
I cant say enough about this powerful metaphoric nature poem... How the author designs, the heartfelt sadness of a homeless and dying tree, and also intertwines the emptiness of her feelings into both is very touching... all around a beautiful and breathtaking poem!!! |
by Karla
Lovely piece. |
by Baby Rainbow
Surely, this sodden ground is no |
Aww this is heartbreaking....I loved all the connections you put in with the tree, how it seemed to take on personifications, and then at the end how you portray feeling nothing to this man from your past perhaps? Amazing intrigue, you made this tree come to life and be such a peaceful companion. Beautiful read! :] |
You have out done ya self what a cool nature |