Lost

by ah satan 666   Nov 6, 2012


Ooo... Challenge time is here again :)
What to write?...
There's too many options.
Right made my choice.
Pad in hand.
My mind is speeding up...
Rhyming, structured, non structured, acrostic?
I giggle to myself, as the images of the words in my mind...
play out a Super Mario car race.
Shunting each other out the way to come first.
Almost at the finish line... its close,
Which one will it be?
Amusingly lost in thought.
Everything immediately crashes to a holt...
As I hit the emergency breaks and focus.
Where the f**k is my pen?
Damn, now I've gotta start my race again! :/

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  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Omg I giggled with this!

    So often writers have so many things played in their heads with challenges, and this was a perfect display of it :) Often times lose their pens as well when they have their ideas together lol

    great job hun! Really really awesome write :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Lmfreeeaaakinao!!!

    I just spat coffee every where, and theaward goes to the most unique write to date lol

    Funny as hell but i gotta say you convey thought process really damn well here, i read it at about 10moh drifting all the way!!

    Great write Natasha :)

    • 12 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thanks dude...

      ... But don't blame me for your lack of self control... Get a bib :p

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Double post =/

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Excellent written
    keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I really liked this one for the challenge and I actually do find it very funny. It made me chuckle. You took a totally different approach tot his challenge so well done. xx

    • 12 years ago

      by ah satan 666

      Thankyou saffie :),

      I was just explaining what was going on in my head at the time lol

      I often play games with words in my head before I jot them down.... I'm glad you liked it :) xx

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